A justice for Milou.

Crossover between "Law abiding citizen" and "The adventures of Tintin"


Tintin is a young reporter who travels the world to solve cases. His best friend is Snowy, a white Fox Terrier.





Tintin is being arrested by Miami Police, he remains silent, he knows that his plans are finally going to happen...

- "What went through your mind?!" yells detective Harry Smart, "killing him?! With a hammer?!" he sighs.

- "He deserved it, I could imagine him dieing, it felt good." Tintin whispers.

- "Well we're done."

- "No we're not, why don't you sit down, we have to talk."

- "Talk about what? How you butchered him??? We're done here Tintin."


- "Did I say I killed him? I just said that he deserved it, that I could imagine him dieing and that it felt good."

- "But everyone knows what happened, you murdered Paul Frank!"

- "It's not about what we know but about proof you can give to the court! Don't you remember? Here's the deal, I want a double bed with four pillows and a soft blanket, then you'll have my confessions."

Today Tintin's new double bed, plus four pillows, plus blanket are being delivered. We can hear all the prisoners yelling and messing around.

- "Thank you for that! I appreciate!" throws Tintin.

Detective Harry Smart is really annoyed having to deal with Tintin. But he finally gets his confessions.

A week later Tintin is in the court, he confesses everything. But when the judge asks him if he has anything to say, he stands up and starts his speech.

- "Your Honour, this is the very first time I've ever been involved with the justice, and I don't find jail very pleasant, therefore I ask you if I can go home while the verdict's being deliberate." he is so persuasive that the judge starts considering his request.

- "Knowing that you behaved quite well during the past week in jail, and that it's indeed your first time with the justice.."

- "Stop stop please! Are you kidding me? Are you really considering letting me go? After what I've done! Do you have a clue of what JUSTICE means???" he interrupts the judge, angry.

- "Mr Tintin please tone down!"

- "No I'm not finished! People out there can be in danger if you let me free, do you know that? Does it happen with all the defendants? What are you doing here? You would be better in a playground than here your Honour!"

- "Enough!" says the judge with a very embarrassed tone.

Tintin is taken back to jail. He knows everybody in court is now disturbed and doesn't know whether to like what Tintin says or not. Because after all, maybe he's right.

Four days later detective Smart gets a phone call from the judge saying that Sally Deer has reported her husband has been missing for two days now. Sally Deer is the wife of John Deer, of one the jury for Tintin's trial. Smart decides to go to jail to visit Tintin.

- "What happened to him Tintin? Where is he?!"

- "Don't worry he's safe but not for long, listen it's simple, I'll tell you if we make another deal."

- "What again?" asks Smart with an irritated tone.

- "I hate food here in jail, lets be honest it's quite disgusting isn't it? I'd like a nice meal from that restaurant in Grand Avenue, "Spragio" you know? A T-bone steak with steamed asparagus and macaroni. Before 12.30pm. Don't be late detective!"

Harry Smart does everything he can to be in time, he wants to save that poor John Deer so much! But unfortunately with all safety measures the director of the jail demands, the dish arrives 8 minutes late. So they got there 8 minutes late. He could have been alive, but Tintin's plan was just too good.

Five years ago something terrible happened to Tintin, and he wants now everybody to pay for it.

Detective Smart goes to see Tintin in jail and try to figure out what's really going on.

- "I told you not to be late Harry, didn't you hear me?" says Tintin as Harry Smart enters the cell.

- "Enough now, you think you can be smarter than me? Many other mad and bad people like you tried in the past. But you forgot something, this is my job and I'm the best at it!"

- "That's what you think! Let me ask you something, why do you think I'm playing this game with you, why?" yells Tintin at the detective's face.

The detective Smart is clueless he has no idea what to say or even what to do.

Tintin keeps talking "here's my deal, you drop every legal action against me and no one will be killed anymore. I always keep my word detective."

Smart chuckles "no more deal Tintin. I got it. It's over."

- "Finally!" sighs Tintin with a big smile on his face.

Five years ago, Tintin's dog and best friend Milou, got decapitated by a drunk man named Paul Frank, justice condemned him for only $1500 of damages. Milou was everything to Tintin, he was following him everywhere, helping him, simply sharing his life.